Rain

A talented young writer wrote this in conversation and I just had to compile these lines and put them in a piece, please let her know what your think. I for one love this

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under a thin sheet
cause the sheet isn’t for warm
no its to seclude naked bodies from the rest of the world
and there it would be
butt to pelvis
spooning
all naked an stuff
just smelling his manly man musk
and his arm rested on the tummy just over the belly
loose enough for comfort
and tight enough for when that boogie man comes out the closet, you know your safe
and in that security, you can melt away in his embrace
skin to skin
back to chest
I don’t even mind his breath on my neck
and his heart beat is racing in time with the rain drops on the ceiling
tracing my hand over his rough leg hairs
his right hand snakes around to cup wanting breasts
cause normal folks don’t let them hang out,
so the hand is like a warm bra with no straps
they knead the breast
and the bassy vibrations rolling from his neck and chest when he says
“I could stay like this forever”
and I shimmy my backside to cradle comfortably in/on his pelvis
no boundaries
just like God intended
flesh to flesh
Naked!
and we lay there
just living
cuddling
spooning
Naked!

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About Michelle Toussaint

Michelle Toussaint is an Antiguan who has amassed an Associate Degree in Science Education as well as a Diploma in Forensic Science. As such, she Teaches Science in the classroom as well as at home, where she leads...er... co-leads The Tribe. A merry band comprising her Husband-The Chief, herself-The Priestess, and her three precocious children- the tribesmen. When she isn’t mothering, teaching, being a fangirl or feeding her chocolate addiction. She writes two blogs. Random_Michelle and Death By Expectations. View all posts by Michelle Toussaint

2 responses to “Rain

  • PassionPoet

    “the hand is like a warm bra with no straps….”

    WOW Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    She just wrote this in a conversation? Tell her I wanna read a poem she planned! But this one is BRILLIANT!

    Points of note:

    “cause the sheet isn’t for warm…” should be “cause the sheet isn’t for warmTH”

    “and tight enough for when that boogie man comes out the closet, you know your safe” should be “… you know YOU’RE safe”

    “and I shimmy my backside to cradle comfortably in/on his pelvis” I like ON for that line.

    Like

  • mzbrownsugga

    nice piece.. can only imagine what she could come up with if she considered this a draft and worked on it some more..

    Like

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