Excuse me, but did you just call me fat?
Did you just really attempt to squeeze all this into three little letters?
Did you just say that with a sneer and a sniff in my direction?
Did you just call me fat?
Did you just give reference to all this voluptuous with a tone condescension?
Are you sniggering at the fact that I am awesome by the pound?
Did you just attempt to detract from my functional fluff with a scoff?
Not weighing my advantages on cold nights and kidnappings?
Did you just try to deride my jiggle and sway?
While trying to wiggle your way into some semblance of tantalizing movement?
Did you really just call me fat?
Did you just set forth a lyrical travesty?
Speaking badly not just of me but of the hedonistic soul that loves me by the kilo?
Did you just call me fat?
Did you just curl your lip at me, the living definition of vivacious?
With personality wider than my hips, stronger than my thighs, more fruitful than my breasts,
And deeper than the sum of all your opinions?
Did you just call me fat?
Baby you don’t know what you’re missing.
January 25th, 2015 at 2:19 pm
Kaboom!
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January 25th, 2015 at 11:28 pm
Robert when will Seduction be available on Kindle? I’m finally finished erotic, had to take a few breaks to catch my breath, and I’m ready for round 2.
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January 26th, 2015 at 12:13 pm
It’s already available … Go to my Amazon author page – http://www.amazon.com/Robert-Gibson/e/B00IINWO8C
And THANKS for support. PLEASE do me a favour and leave Erotic a review! And don’t forget to do the same for Seduction … I have a small book named Offering as well! Check it out!
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January 26th, 2015 at 11:49 pm
Will do.
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January 25th, 2015 at 2:36 pm
Love it!
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January 25th, 2015 at 3:02 pm
Thanks Miss Jackson
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January 25th, 2015 at 10:37 pm
You just blew me away, as you have a few times before.
You make me wish I was carrying a bit of extra weight. I feel inferior, with my skinny bum and diminished b-cups!
And as for your “lyrical travesty”! Yes, that’s definately one to add to my collection of phrases I wish I’d created, but didn’t so I can’t use!
I must remember how much I love your poems, and keep up with them.
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January 25th, 2015 at 11:26 pm
Thank you, lol, us big girls might say the same. With our G cups and clothing quandaries, we might wish to be smaller. But being fluffy is a state of mind, so consider this your honorary induction into the sisterhood. lol
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January 26th, 2015 at 10:56 am
I just “liked” this post, but “liking” is totally inadequate.
I love it!
And I think that I already love you too!
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January 26th, 2015 at 11:48 pm
Thank you Lance, your comment has made my day if not my week.
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January 26th, 2015 at 11:55 pm
Oh good! NOTHING makes me happier than making somebody else happy. And I mean that most sincerely. So your response made my week too. Seriously!
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January 27th, 2015 at 12:11 am
Perhaps a few of your followers would like my anthology When Pleasure Blooms or my time-travelling coach tour Lance’s Coach Tour #2. Perhaps you’d re-blog?
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January 30th, 2015 at 11:41 am
Saw you just declared yourself a writer on your facebook page – looks like it’s fully justified!
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February 8th, 2015 at 3:14 pm
Snap!
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March 3rd, 2015 at 2:02 am
I have a few names for you but fat isn’t any of them. Here are my words try these on. Beautiful (Your soul is beautiful). Awesome (your writing is awesome). Deep (The smallest word I have but this ones true also). Brave. You are Awesomely deep brave and beautiful.
Hope those words are more to you liking they are all true!
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April 14th, 2015 at 2:57 am
lovely post and good writing
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September 1st, 2018 at 1:08 am
[…] Click on the image below to read the poem “Excuse You?” […]
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September 1st, 2018 at 1:34 am
Finding your blog again has been today’s biggest revelation and I just love your work. I even did a write up on you over on my blog and shared this particular poem as a beautiful example of your work. Thank you.
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September 15th, 2018 at 1:43 pm
Thank you so much. Sorry its taken me this long to reply.
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